Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Second look


   This was from my “What’s in my wallet” blog post. Along with plenty of spelling and grammar issues, I looked over the whole thing and realized how scatter brained I must have been while writing this. So instead of explaining everything so fast, I slowed it down, and went in depth a little more with what I was trying to get across, and explaining what was actually in my wallet. When I get going on something, it is sometimes hard for me to see that I am not making sense half the time, or leave things very vague. I know there are plenty of assignments that I could look over and edit, but for this assignment I could only choose one.

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